How do you recharge after socializing?
학생이 쓴 원문
My personality is introvert. So. meeting friends or colleagues makes me tired.
After meeting, I usually recharge my energy through exercise.
MY favorite exercise is running. Running is good to spend many sweat.
Sweating a lot will make me fresh. It is good for relieving stress.
Always doing exercise is my goal. But It is so difficult.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. You did a great job expressing your thoughts! I made some corrections to improve grammar and sentence flow. Your writing clearly conveys your feelings about social interactions and how you recharge. Keep practicing, and great work!
~ T. Lia
My personality is introvert. So. meeting friends or colleagues makes me tired.
>> My personality is introverted, so meeting friends or colleagues makes me feel tired.
After meeting, I usually recharge my energy through exercise.
>> After socializing, I usually recharge my energy through exercise.
MY favorite exercise is running.
>> CORRECT
Running is good to spend many sweat.
>> Running helps me sweat a lot.
Sweating a lot will make me fresh. It is good for relieving stress.
>> Sweating makes me feel refreshed and helps relieve stress.
Always doing exercise is my goal. But It is so difficult.
>> Exercising regularly is my goal, but it is very challenging.
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