How do you relax after a busy week? Give specific details.

You are right, Sir [이름]!

We should find time to relax on weekends.

It is okay to be a couch-potato sometimes.

It is because we need to rest and relax after a long busy week.

You deserve to have something special and spend time with your family.

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Teacher Nina

I play tennis during the weekends.

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>> Better: I play tennis on weekends.

It is the meaningful time to me not only because I can exercise and stay healthy but also to relieve stress from work.

>> It is a meaningful time to me not only because I can exercise and stay healthy but also I can relieve stress from work.

Sweating through exercise can greatly help us relax.

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It helps our body to eliminate toxins and fight skin infections.

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After playing tennis, I feel tired and would like to get some sleep because I don’t get enough sleep during the weekdays, but it’s sometimes not easy to have time.

>> After playing tennis, I feel tired and would like to get some sleep because I don’t get enough sleep during the weekdays, but it’s sometimes not easy to have time for that.

Most of time, my wife and daughter are looking forward to the weekends to go shopping, go on a picnic, or go camping etc.

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I need to spend time together with them.

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However, I often feel guilty after spending the weekend without doing anything special.

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I feel like I just wasted the valuable time.

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I am quite obsessed with the thought that we should live a moment fully.

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We should spend the weekends productively and efficiently.

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We shouldn’t lie down on the bed or be a couch-potato during the weekends.

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>> OR: We shouldn’t lie down on the bed or be a couch-potato on weekends.

We should spend time to sharpen our skills.

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