How do you relieve stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have ample time to relax I normally go shopping or ride my motorbike around my place. It refreshes my mind and cheers me up a lot. Besides, Listening to music gives me great relief when I\'m stressed. In addition, any time I need to let off a bit of steam, I often call or chat with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]! ^^
We have similar ways of relieving stress.
We have similar ways of relieving stress.
Music really helps me feel better too~ ^^
Thank you for this composition. See you in class!
Thank you for this composition. See you in class!
- T. Rina
1. If I have ample time to relax I normally go shopping or ride my motorbike around my place.
>> CORRECT!
2. It refreshes my mind and cheers me up a lot.
>> CORRECT!
3. Besides, Listening to music gives me great relief when I\'m stressed.
>> CORRECT!
4. In addition, any time I need to let off a bit of steam, I often call or chat with my friends.
>> CORRECT!
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