How do you remain calm in stressful situations?
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Actually I can\'t stand a anger well. Almost when stressful situations happened, I was angry and shout. But I become calm in very urgent and serious situations because in this situation, If I can\'t remain calm, problems won\'t be solved.
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Actually I can\'t stand a anger well. >>> Correct
Almost when stressful situations happened, I was angry and shout.
>>> Most of the time when stressful situations happen, I get angry and I shout.
But I become calm in very urgent and serious situations because in this situation, If I can\'t remain calm, problems won\'t be solved.
>>> Correct
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