How do you see yourself 10 years from now?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Nice to see you in the English lesson.
After 10 years, my age will be 61.
I never thought my age would be 51. But I was 51.
When I was young, I want to be an audlt quickly. At that time, the time is slowing than my hoping. But now, I think that is faster than my thinking.
In the future, I will be as like my parents and someday will die.
But after 10 years, I will have a grand son or daughter.
That is my hoping.
Foutunely, I have a job now, I will have this job after 10 years.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
Here are the corrections on your composition. Enjoy your weekend ^^
Dear [Name],
Nice to see you in the English lesson.
Nice to see you in the English lesson.
>> Nice to see you in our English lesson.
After 10 years, my age will be 61.
>> CORRECT
I never thought my age would be 51. But I was 51.
>> I never thought my age would be 51. But I am 51 years old.
When I was young, I want to be an audlt quickly. At that time, the time is slowing than my hoping. But now, I think that is faster than my thinking.
>> When I was young, I want to be an adult quickly or I was in a hurry to become an adult. In those years, the time was so slow than what I was hoping. But now, I think it is faster than what I have thought.
In the future, I will be as like my parents and someday will die.
>> In the future, I will be like my parents and someday, I will die.
But after 10 years, I will have a grand son or daughter.
>> But after 10 years or in the future, I will have a grandson or granddaughter.
That is my hoping.
>> That is what I am hoping.
Foutunely, I have a job now, I will have this job after 10 years
>> Fortunely, I have a job now and I will continue to work for 10 years.
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