How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

2022-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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After 10 years, I will be 38 years old. That time I have a wife, daughter and son. We will grill the barbecue, sausage and sweet potato in the yard.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

That sounds like a great and happy family that you have! :)

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After 10 years, I will be 38 years old.

>> CORRECT

That time I have a wife, daughter and son.

>> By that time, I will have a wife, son, and daughter.

We will grill the barbecue, sausage and sweet potato in the yard.

>> We will grill the barbecue, sausage and sweet potato at the yard.

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