How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

2022-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I can\'t sure that I will succeed my goals, but one thing that is sure is I will make an effort for my goals. There can be a lot of situations, so I can\'t sure about achieving my goals. But I will not give up my dreams, and also I will make an effort for my goals because I know me the most. And I think I will be happy even tough I may not succeed my dreams.

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I can\'t sure that I will succeed my goals, but one thing that is sure is I will make an effort for my goals.

>> I am not sure if I will succeed in my goals, but one thing that I know is that I will make an effort to do so.

There can be a lot of situations, so I can\'t sure about achieving my goals.

>> There can be a lot of situations that may happen, so I can\'t sure about achieving my goals.

But I will not give up my dreams, and also I will make an effort for my goals because I know me the most.

>> I know to myself that I won\'t give up easily on my dreams.

And I think I will be happy even tough I may not succeed my dreams.

>> And I think I will be happy even though I may not achieve my dreams.

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