How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

2022-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

I will be 50\'s in 10 years from now. I believe that my dreams come true. First, I will pay my debt to the bank, because l bought my house with bank\'s loan last year and I promised to pay back in 10 years. It make me happy to think and I will do it surely. Second, I will be the author of my own book. I told you yesterday that me co-worker recomended to write a book with her. So I will try it this year and then, I will try again for publishing my own book. Last, I will be in Singarpore. These days, it is not safe from disease but If I can have a chance to go abroad, I hope to visit Singapore. Like I mentioned before, the country is famous in biophilic city and I heard there is reasonable rules and people keep well. So I really go there and stay for a month. That\'s all!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Arissa,

Wow! I appreciate you for sharing your plans and visions. I\'m happy that your vision involves clearing a goal, improving your career while doing what you really like in life and having leisure with travel. It\'s also a very nice way to learn about others. 
I sincerely hope and pray that you will be able to attain these. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I will be 50\'s in 10 years from now. I believe that my dreams come true. First, I will pay my debt to the bank, because l bought my house with bank\'s loan last year and I promised to pay back in 10 years. It make me happy to think and I will do it surely. Second, I will be the author of my own book. I told you yesterday that me co-worker recomended to write a book with her. So I will try it this year and then, I will try again for publishing my own book. Last, I will be in Singarpore. These days, it is not safe from disease but If I can have a chance to go abroad, I hope to visit Singapore. Like I mentioned before, the country is famous in biophilic city and I heard there is reasonable rules and people keep well. So I really go there and stay for a month. That\'s all!

>> I will be in my 50\'s ten years from now. I believe that my dreams have come true. First, I will pay my debt to the bank because l bought my house with a bank loan last year and promised to pay it back in 10 years. It makes me happy to think about it, and I will do it surely. Second, I will be the author of my own book. I told you yesterday that my co-worker recommended writing a book with her. So I will try it this year, and then I will try again to publish my own book. Last, I will be in Singapore. These days, it is not safe from disease, but If I can have a chance to go abroad, I hope to visit Singapore. As I mentioned before, the country is famous as a biophilic city, and I heard there are reasonable rules and people keep them well. So I really want to go there and stay for a month. That\'s all!

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