How do you see yourself 30 years from now?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think, it is too long time for me to think myself after 30 years from now. because I am 51 years old. so after 30 years, I will be 81 years old. My father is 85 years old, so I could not walk well and I am always in bed and I am going to wait my grand son or daughter.
but I don\'t want to be my father, because my father didn\'t care himself, so he has a lot of diseases, so he always eat many pills.
For example, diabetes and blood pressure, kidney, liver pills,
I take a walk 7km everyday and I have a medical check every year and if I feel the pain for my body, I go to hospital without hesitate.
So I want to live long time with good health.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]
but I don\'t want to be my father, because my father didn\'t care himself, so he has a lot of diseases, so he always eat many pills.
For example, diabetes and blood pressure, kidney, liver pills,
I take a walk 7km everyday and I have a medical check every year and if I feel the pain for my body, I go to hospital without hesitate.
So I want to live long time with good health.
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Dear [Name],
I think, it is too long time for me to think myself after 30 years from now. because I am 51 years old. so after 30 years, I will be 81 years old. My father is 85 years old, so I could not walk well and I am always in bed and I am going to wait my grand son or daughter.
I think, it is too long time for me to think myself after 30 years from now. because I am 51 years old. so after 30 years, I will be 81 years old. My father is 85 years old, so I could not walk well and I am always in bed and I am going to wait my grand son or daughter.
>> I think 30 years from now is too long for me to think of myself because I am 51 years old so after 30 years, I will be 81 years old. My father was 85 years old, so I won\'t be able walk well and I will always in bed and I\'ll just wait for my grandson or granddaughter.
but I don\'t want to be my father, because my father didn\'t care himself, so he has a lot of diseases, so he always eat many pills.
>> But I don\'t want to be like my father because my father didn\'t take care of himself so he has a lot of diseases and took many pills.
For example, diabetes and blood pressure, kidney, liver pills,
>> His illnesses were diabetes, blood pressure, kidney and liver problems.
I take a walk 7km everyday and I have a medical check every year and if I feel the pain for my body, I go to hospital without hesitate.
>> I take walk of 7km every day and I have a medical check up every year and if I feel pain on my body, I go to the hospital without hesitation.
So I want to live long time with good health.
>> So I want to live for a long time with good health.
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