How do you see yourself in 5 years?
학생이 쓴 원문
This universe has a lot of opportunities to change my life momentum. I am going to be the one who will be involved in this cycle. Although my wish is opening new YouTube channel, somehow it will not allow me to do. On the other hand, I could be recruited as a diplomat who can bond relationship between South Korea and ASEAN unexpectedly. Nothing is planned. It might be seen risky. However, I believe setting me free will lead another possibility to find a real myself and the thing I am sure that the future will be more stable than now. Difficulties I am facing on these days are going to be ingredient to overcome upcoming obstacles.
P.S. Happy Birthday 🥳 Hope you read this paragraph next monday :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Matthew,
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your birthday greeting as well :) See you next week!
~ T. Demi ^^
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your birthday greeting as well :) See you next week!
~ T. Demi ^^
CORRECT!
OR>> The universe presents many opportunities that can alter the momentum of my life.
I am going to be the one who will be involved in this cycle.
CORRECT!
CORRECT!
OR>> I am going to be involved in this cycle.
Although my wish is opening new YouTube channel, somehow it will not allow me to do.
>> Although I wanted to start a new YouTube channel, somehow I feel like it will not happen.
On the other hand, I could be recruited as a diplomat who can bond relationship between South Korea and ASEAN unexpectedly.
>> On the other hand, I could unexpectedly be recruited as a diplomat to strengthen the relationship between South Korea and ASEAN.
>> On the other hand, I could unexpectedly be recruited as a diplomat to strengthen the relationship between South Korea and ASEAN.
Nothing is planned. It might be seen risky.
>> I don\'t have any plans at the moment, which might be seen as risky.
>> I don\'t have any plans at the moment, which might be seen as risky.
However, I believe setting me free will lead another possibility to find a real myself and the thing I am sure that the future will be more stable than now.
>> However, I believe that setting myself free will allow me to discover who I truly am. I am certain that the future will be more stable.
Difficulties I am facing on these days are going to be ingredient to overcome upcoming obstacles.
>> Overcoming current difficulties will prepare me for upcoming obstacles.
>> Overcoming current difficulties will prepare me for upcoming obstacles.
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