How do you see yourself ten years from now?

2021-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

In fact, I didn’t have a dream and know what I am good at until last year. Therefore, I had hard time to find what I want to do last year. But, I had just one favorite thing. Although I was not good at Japanese but I was happy when using Japanese. Before I entered my university, I didn’t know anything about Japanese. But I started studying Japanese because I am interested about Japan thanks for animation and travel. My interest about Japanese was bigger after going to japan as an exchange student. I wanted to Graduate School of Translation but I couldn’t go to there because I didn’t got permission from my parents because of financial reasons. So, I decided to go to Japan this year to make money using Japanese. If I adjust to life of japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now. But if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now. I don’t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work using Japanese.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework! I really got inspired by your story and plans in life. I believe with determination and hard work, you can achieve your dreams. Take care! -Faith-
In fact, I didn’t have a dream and know what I am good at until last year.
>> CORRECT
OR Frankly speaking, I used to not having dreams and knowing what I am good at until last year.
Therefore, I had hard time to find what I want to do last year.
>> Therefore, I had a hard time to find what I wanted to do last year.
But, I had just one favorite thing.
>> CORRECT
Although I was not good at Japanese but I was happy when using Japanese.
>> Although I was not good at Japanese, I was happy when using the language.
Before I entered my university, I didn’t know anything about Japanese.
>> CORRECT
But I started studying Japanese because I am interested about Japan thanks for animation and travel.
>> But, I started studying Japanese because I have become interested about Japan, thanks to animations and my travel experience.
My interest about Japanese was bigger after going to japan as an exchange student.
>> My interest about Japanese grew bigger after going to japan as an exchange student.
I wanted to Graduate School of Translation but I couldn’t go to there because I didn’t got permission from my parents because of financial reasons.
>> I wanted to go to graduate school of translation but I couldn’t go there because I didn’t get permission from my parents because of financial reasons.
So, I decided to go to Japan this year to make money using Japanese.
>> CORRECT
OR Thus, I made up my mind to go to Japan this year and earn money using their language.
If I adjust to life of japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now.
>> If I adjust to life in Japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now.
But if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now.
>> But, if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now.
 
I don’t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work using Japanese.
>> I couldn\'t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work there using Japanese.

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