How do you see yourself ten years from now?
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, I didn’t have a dream and know what I am good at until last year.
Therefore, I had hard time to find what I want to do last year.
But, I had just one favorite thing. Although I was not good at Japanese but I was happy when using Japanese.
Before I entered my university, I didn’t know anything about Japanese.
But I started studying Japanese because I am interested about Japan thanks for animation and travel.
My interest about Japanese was bigger after going to japan as an exchange student.
I wanted to Graduate School of Translation but I couldn’t go to there because I didn’t got permission from my parents because of financial reasons.
So, I decided to go to Japan this year to make money using Japanese.
If I adjust to life of japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now.
But if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now.
I don’t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work using Japanese.
강사 첨삭
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In fact, I didn’t have a dream and know what I am good at until last year.>> CORRECT
OR Frankly speaking, I used to not having dreams and knowing what I am good at until last year.
Therefore, I had hard time to find what I want to do last year.
>> Therefore, I had a hard time to find what I wanted to do last year.
But, I had just one favorite thing.
But, I had just one favorite thing.
>> CORRECT
Although I was not good at Japanese but I was happy when using Japanese.
>> Although I was not good at Japanese, I was happy when using the language.
Before I entered my university, I didn’t know anything about Japanese.
Before I entered my university, I didn’t know anything about Japanese.
>> CORRECT
But I started studying Japanese because I am interested about Japan thanks for animation and travel.
But I started studying Japanese because I am interested about Japan thanks for animation and travel.
>> But, I started studying Japanese because I have become interested about Japan, thanks to animations and my travel experience.
My interest about Japanese was bigger after going to japan as an exchange student.
My interest about Japanese was bigger after going to japan as an exchange student.
>> My interest about Japanese grew bigger after going to japan as an exchange student.
I wanted to Graduate School of Translation but I couldn’t go to there because I didn’t got permission from my parents because of financial reasons.
I wanted to Graduate School of Translation but I couldn’t go to there because I didn’t got permission from my parents because of financial reasons.
>> I wanted to go to graduate school of translation but I couldn’t go there because I didn’t get permission from my parents because of financial reasons.
So, I decided to go to Japan this year to make money using Japanese.
So, I decided to go to Japan this year to make money using Japanese.
>> CORRECT
OR Thus, I made up my mind to go to Japan this year and earn money using their language.
If I adjust to life of japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now.
If I adjust to life of japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now.
>> If I adjust to life in Japan, I will become a Japanese office worker 10 years from now.
But if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now.
But if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now.
>> But, if I want to come back to Korea, I will become a Japanese translator 10 years from now.
I don’t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work using Japanese.
I don’t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work using Japanese.
>> I couldn\'t predict my future but it is a fact that I will work there using Japanese.
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