How do you see youself in 10 years?
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I asked the same question 10 years ago.I had many dreams and aspirations that I would like to accomplish within 10 years to come. In 10 years, I can see myself having few of my goals accomplished. I do not look like what I planned or wanted to be in terms of my physical appearance, professional, social status, and financial soundness. Where and what will I be 10 years from now? Unlike a young boy, many things have been fixed already and few things remain undecided yet due to my age. I will reach retirement age in ten years. I might end up with two options in 10 years: still working for the company or running my own business. It will be fortunate for me to continue to be employed until that time. If I lost job, I would need to run my own business. If I keep working, there would be not much difference from now. But if I run my own business, there would be huge differences and it is hard to imagine how I and my life would be.I have not prepared anything yet for such a case, so I need it
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A marvelous Wednesday to you Sir [이름]^^
I know that you will be able to reach your dreams it\'s because you are a hardworking person. ^^
Just keep on dreaming and of course don\'t forget to keep an eye on your goal.
All of us have aspirations and dreams that we want to accomplish and with determination we can do it!
I am so proud of you because you always look into the brighter side of life. ^^ Just keep on believing in yoursefl! Can\'t wait to talk to you in class! See you!Teacher Nina
I asked the same question 10 years ago.
>> Correct
I had many dreams and aspirations that I would like to accomplish within 10 years to come.
>> I have many dreams and aspirations that I would like to accomplish within ten years.
In 10 years, I can see myself having few of my goals accomplished.
>> Correct
I do not look like what I planned or wanted to be in terms of my physical appearance, professional, social status, and financial soundness.
>> I do not look like what I planned or wanted to be in terms of my physical appearance, profession, social status, and financial soundness.
Where and what will I be 10 years from now?
>> Correct!
Unlike a young boy, many things have been fixed already and few things remain undecided yet due to my age.
>> Unlike a young boy, many things have been fixed already and there are few things that remain undecided yet due to my age.
I will reach retirement age in ten years.
>> I will reach the retirement age in ten years.
I might end up with two options in 10 years: still working for the company or running my own business.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I might end up with two options in ten years which are I am still working for the companu or running my own business.
It will be fortunate for me to continue to be employed until that time.
>> Correct!
If I lost job, I would need to run my own business.
>> If I lost my job, I would need to run my own business.
If I keep working, there would be not much difference from now.
>> Correct!
But if I run my own business, there would be huge differences and it is hard to imagine how I and my life would be.
>> But if I run my own business, there would be a huge difference and it is hard to imagine how my life would be.
I have not prepared anything yet for such a case, so I need it
>> Did you mean: I have not prepared anything yet for that situation so I need to think about it.
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