How do you show consideration to your friends or family?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I reflect on myself because the way I show consideration to my friends and family is different, so I get scolded a lot by my family. But I\'ll be honest with you.
I\'m the type who is remarkably considerate to my friends. I don\'t bring up sensitive issues, pretend not to know them, and I take good care of them. Sometimes I listen well and most of the time I listen well if my friend wants.
However, I make a hateful expression and speaks bluntly to my family, but I seem to show consideration by paying attention to everything they do and listen to everything they do.
My family says something to me about the problem every time, but I think the problem is that it is not easily fixed even though I reflect on myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sending your answer. I’ve checked it and added some corrections to help make your ideas clearer. You expressed your thoughts honestly, and I appreciate how reflective you were in your writing. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Well, I reflect on myself because the way I show consideration to my friends and family is different, so I get scolded a lot by my family.
>> Well, I reflect on myself because the way I show consideration to my friends and family is different, so my family often scolds me.
>> Or: I think about my actions because I treat my friends and family differently, and my family scolds me for it.
>> Or: I think about my actions because I treat my friends and family differently, and my family scolds me for it.
But I\'ll be honest with you.
>> CORRECT.
I\'m the type who is remarkably considerate to my friends.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’m the kind of person who’s extremely thoughtful with my friends.
I don\'t bring up sensitive issues, pretend not to know them, and I take good care of them.
>> I don’t bring up sensitive issues, I pretend not to notice them, and I take good care of my friends.
>> Or: I avoid sensitive topics, act like I don’t notice them, and treat my friends well.
Sometimes I listen well and most of the time I listen well if my friend wants.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’m usually a good listener whenever my friend needs it.
However, I make a hateful expression and speaks bluntly to my family, but I seem to show consideration by paying attention to everything they do and listen to everything they do.
>> However, I tend to make annoyed expressions and speak bluntly to my family, although I still show consideration by paying attention to everything they do and listening to them.
My family says something to me about the problem every time, but I think the problem is that it is not easily fixed even though I reflect on myself.
>> My family brings this up to me every time, but I think the problem is that it’s not easy to fix, even though I try to reflect on myself.
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