How do you show your love for your country, South Korea or how do you show your patriotism?
학생이 쓴 원문
I do many things for my country, South Korea. First, I learn about history almost every day. Also, I hang on Korean flag on important day of Korea. I love Korea, my country.
강사 첨삭
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I do many things for my country, South Korea.
>> correct~~
First, I learn about history almost every day.
>> or: First, I learn about our history almost every day.
>> or: >> or: First, I learn about our history almost daily.
Also, I hang on Korean flag on important day of Korea.
>> Also, I hang the Korean flag on important days of Korea. (I used \'days\' instead of \'day\' because I want to emphasize that Korea has more than one important day.)
I love Korea, my country.
>> correct~~
>> or: I love my motherland, Korea. (Motherland, homeland, native land, country of origin, and home country are synonyms or other words of one\'s own country.)
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