How do you spice something up?
학생이 쓴 원문
To spice up my life, I try to visit foreign country for vacation every once a year. If conditions are not available, I have a trip to some famous places in korea. Otherwise I go to camping with my friends that I love.
To spice up my daily life, I do a lot of things. First, I often hang out with my friends or colleagues to grab some drinks. Plus doing a sports such as soccer, tennis is another way getting my feelings better. But favorite thing I like is having some delicious grilled beef (or fork) at the restaurant quite often. Juicy and tender meat always makes me happier and also healthier.
강사 첨삭
Good evening George,
I appreciate your answers because you are really trying to explain what you are thinking and I like that. Continue doing the way you are doing it, and don\'t be afraid in making mistakes.
Keep it up!
Sincerely cheering for you!
Teacher Annie
How do you spice something up?
To spice up my life, I try to visit foreign country for vacation every once a year. If conditions are not available, I have a trip to some famous places in korea. Otherwise I go to camping with my friends that I love.
>>>To spice up my life, I try to visit a foreign country for a vacation once in a year. If conditions are not available, then I\'ll have a short trip to a famous place in Korea. Otherwise I go to camping with my friends which I really love doing.
To spice up my daily life, I do a lot of things. First, I often hang out with my friends or colleagues to grab some drinks. Plus doing a sports such as soccer, tennis is another way getting my feelings better. But favorite thing I like is having some delicious grilled beef (or fork) at the restaurant quite often. Juicy and tender meat always makes me happier and also healthier.
To spice up my daily life, I do a lot of things. First, I often hang out with my friends or colleagues to grab some drinks. Plus doing a sports such as soccer, tennis is another way getting my feelings better. But favorite thing I like is having some delicious grilled beef (or fork) at the restaurant quite often. Juicy and tender meat always makes me happier and also healthier.
>>>To spice up my daily life, I do a lot of things. First, I often hang out with my friends or colleagues and usually we grab some drinks. Another is doing a sport such as soccer and tennis. Tennis is another way getting my feelings better. But my favorite thing is having some delicious grilled beef or pork at the restaurant and I do it often. Juicy and tender meat always makes me happy and also more healthy.
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