How do you start your day?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I make a bed as soon as i woke up.
Next, I drink a cup of water and wash my face.
When it’s 8:30, I do powerenglish.
After class, I eat the breakfast and go to work.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! Thank you for sharing about how you begin your day. I always appreciate your time and effort in making your composition earlier. I will see you in class. Take care! ~T. Lyn
First, I make a bed as soon as i woke up.
>>First, I make my bed as soon as I wake up in the morning.
Next, I drink a cup of water and wash my face.
Next, I drink a cup of water and wash my face.
>>Then, I drink a glass of water and wash my face.
When it’s 8:30, I do powerenglish.
When it’s 8:30, I do powerenglish.
>>Then, I have my Power English class at 8:30 in the morning,
After class, I eat the breakfast and go to work.
After class, I eat the breakfast and go to work.
>>After my class, I have my breakfast and go to work.
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