How do you stay motivated when a long-term goal takes a long time to achieve?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s hard to stay motivated all the time.
To stay motivated, I imagine the feeling when achieving the goals.
I sometimes lose my motivation and even give them up.
However, the most important thing is keeping trying to achieve them until you will make it.
Even if you gave up before, it\'s not a failure if you try again.
강사 첨삭
You shared a very inspiring and reflective answer. I like how you acknowledged that staying motivated all the time is difficult, which makes your response honest and realistic. Your idea that failure is not final as long as you try again is a very powerful message. To improve, focus on verb patterns such as “give up on,” “keep trying,” and smoother expressions when talking about future results. Overall, your message is motivating and thoughtful, great work!
-Teacher Wela
To stay motivated, I imagine the feeling when achieving the goals.
>> To stay motivated, I imagine how I will feel when I achieve my goals.
I sometimes lose my motivation and even give them up.
>> I sometimes lose my motivation and even give up on them.
However, the most important thing is keeping trying to achieve them until you will make it.
>> However, the most important thing is to keep trying to achieve them until you succeed.
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