How do you take care of your body?
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I understand that English could be really difficult.
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T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I take care of my body with eating healthy food.
>> I take care of my body by eating healthy food.
For example, I don\'t eat hamburger and pizza or other instant food that often. But I eat healthy food often.
>> For example, I don\'t eat hamburgers and pizza or other instant food that often, but I often eat healthy food.
I like to eat spinach, salad and kimchi and I like other healthy food.
>> I like to eat spinach, salad, kimchi and I like other healthy food.
OR
>> I like eating spinach, salad, kimchi and other food that are healthy.
Second, I play sports every week.
>> Another thing is that I play sports every week.
I play basketball with my friends and I sometimes play a baseball.
>> I play basketball with my friends and I sometimes play baseball.
I don\'t play baseball as much as basketball, because I like basketball more than baseball.
>> I don\'t play baseball as much as basketball because I like basketball more than baseball.
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