How do you take care of your body?

2021-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I take care of my body with eating healthy food. For example, I don\'t eat hamburger and pizza or other instant food that often. But I eat healthy food often. I like to eat spinach, salad and kimchi and I like other healthy food. Second, I play sports every week. I play basketball with my friends and I sometimes play a baseball. I don\'t play baseball as much as basketball, because I like basketball more than baseball.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I take care of my body with eating healthy food.

>> I take care of my body by eating healthy food.

For example, I don\'t eat hamburger and pizza or other instant food that often. But I eat healthy food often. 

>> For example, I don\'t eat hamburgers and pizza or other instant food that often, but I often eat healthy food. 

I like to eat spinach, salad and kimchi and I like other healthy food. 

>> I like to eat spinach, salad, kimchi and I like other healthy food. 

OR

>> I like eating spinach, salad, kimchi and other food that are healthy.

Second, I play sports every week. 

>> Another thing is that I play sports every week. 

I play basketball with my friends and I sometimes play a baseball. 

>> I play basketball with my friends and I sometimes play baseball. 

I don\'t play baseball as much as basketball, because I like basketball more than baseball.

>> I don\'t play baseball as much as basketball because I like basketball more than baseball.

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