How do you take care of your hair?
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you take care of your hair?
I don\'t take care specially. I do shampoo once or twice a day. If I sweat much, I will do shampoo twice a day.
And I go to hair salon sometimes to take my hair dyed and permed. Permed and dyed hair makes my face look soft.
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [Name]!
Absolutely, I do that too sometimes because I am lazy to wash my hair haha. Dying makes you more radiant and beautiful, too. :)
~Lucy
I don\'t take care specially.
>>CORRECT!
I do shampoo once or twice a day.
>>CORRECT!
If I sweat much, I will do shampoo twice a day.
>>CORRECT!
And I go to hair salon sometimes to take my hair dyed and permed.
>>CORRECT!
Permed and dyed hair makes my face look soft.
>>CORRECT!
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