How do you think about beauty?
학생이 쓴 원문
I told you last weekend that beauty is health.
This health means appearance health and psychical health both.
All people are have diffrent face and body.
So I can't choose only one beautiful appearance.
But I can say that good healthy man have good looks.
It's same that healty plant is beatiful.
however, if someone have the good psychical health, they are not much important appearance bueaty because they make beautiful world.
** today also study by freetalking
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
I actually agree with you that Beauty is HEalth. In America's Next Top Model (an American reality show), that is often emphasized. You have to also take care of yourself and your health in order to maintain your Beauty. Because being beautiful is not just superficial, it must be holistic.
Stay beautiful.
xoxo,
~Ella^^
MY CORRECTIONS^^:I told you last weekend that beauty is health.
>>I told you last Friday that beauty is health.This health means appearance health and psychical health both.
>>This health means not only looking healthy but also being physically healthy inside and out.All people are have diffrent face and body.
>>People have different faces and body types.So I can't choose only one beautiful appearance.
>>CORRECT :)But I can say that good healthy man have good looks.
>>But I can say that a healthy man has good looks.It's same that healty plant is beatiful.
>>It뭩 the same as saying that a healthy plant is beautiful.however, if someone have the good psychical health, they are not much important appearance bueaty because they make beautiful world.
>>However, people who are physically healthy don뭪 give much importance on superficial beauty because they help make the world beautiful by just being healthy.
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