How do you think can racism be stopped?

2022-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Ohhhhh... it\'s a tough question. I think we should only need to respect each other, but it\'s not a reality. And it\'s a serious problem, especially in the United States. After pandemic, the problem seems to have become more hateful towards Asians. And in my personal opinion, the government needs to step up and impose sanctions and strengthen the punishment.

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Hi Elic:)

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Ohhhhh... it\'s a tough question.

>> Oh! That\'s a tough question.

I think we should only need to respect each other, but it\'s not a reality.

>> I think we should respect each other always but not everyone is like that.

And it\'s a serious problem, especially in the United States.

>> CORRECT

After pandemic, the problem seems to have become more hateful towards Asians.

>> After the pandemic, the problem seems to have become more hateful towards Asians.

And in my personal opinion, the government needs to step up and impose sanctions and strengthen the punishment.

>> CORRECT

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