how do you think can the government empower women?

2013-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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As the time is going, the cognition about women is better than befor. If the president Park is borned before 20 years ago, may be she never have been elected by president. Beacause at that time many people thought that man is better than women and women usually just worked the household matter. But now as a generation is changing people's thinking is changing So pople never think man is better than women actually sometimes women is better than man. I think the government bebe empower to women is justify

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HAPPY FRIDAY, VINCENT! Thank you so much for doing a good job with your homework. I hope that you\'ll have a wonderful weekend. Please take care! As the time is going, the cognition about women is better than befor. >>As time passes by, recognition of women is getting better than before.If the president Park is borned before 20 years ago, may be she never have been elected by president. >>If the president was born 20 years ago, she may never have been elected as president.Beacause at that time many people thought that man is better than women and women usually just worked the household matter. >>During that time, many people thought that men is better than women and women usually just have to do the household work.But now as a generation is changing people\'s thinking is changing >>Since our generation is changing, the people\'s way of thinking is also changing.So pople never think man is better than women actually sometimes women is better than man. >>People never thought that men is better than women, but actually, sometimes a women are better than men.I think the government bebe empower to women is justify >>I think the government should empower women to justify...

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