How do you think can the rich countries help the poor countries?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think my country, Korea is little weak with taxation.
In U.S, the citizens pay their income\'s half for their country as tax.
If Korea citizens pay their income\'s half as U.S, there will be a lot of money in National Treasury, and we can use that money for the poor country.
So I think if we pay our income\'s half to our country, we can help the poor countries.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
That\'s actually a good solution but I think a lot of people would be against this because their hard earned money will be offered to other people. :)
>> In Korea, which is my country, taxation is a little weak.
In U.S, the citizens pay their income\'s half for their country as tax.
>> In the US, citizens pay their tax with half their income.
If Korea citizens pay their income\'s half as U.S, there will be a lot of money in National Treasury, and we can use that money for the poor country.
>> If this also happens in Korea, there would be more money in the National Treasury and we can use that to help the poor countries.
So I think if we pay our income\'s half to our country, we can help the poor countries.
>> So I think if we pay our tax with half of our income, we can help poor countries.
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