How do you think can we encourage people to take the COVID-19 vaccine?

2022-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think there should need a medicine. Although there are a lot of vaccines, It can\'t prevent 100%.

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Yes, that is true. There should already be a medicine for it already so that not a lot of people would suffer anymore.

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I think there should need a medicine.

>> I think there should be a medicine for it.

Although there are a lot of vaccines, It can\'t prevent 100%.

>> Although there are a lot of vaccines, it can\'t be prevented for 100%.

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