How do you think can we solve traffic problems there in South Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people usually take public transportation at rush hours. And they have to regulate their own car about once a month. Above all, I think we increase the bus and subway lines and reduce the interval between trains.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
Those are great ideas!
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I think people usually take public transportation at rush hours.
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And they have to regulate their own car about once a month.
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Above all, I think we increase the bus and subway lines and reduce the interval between trains.
>> Above all, I think we should increase the number of buses and subway lines and reduce the interval between trains.
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