How do you think can your country overcome it's financial adversities?
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm not a economist, so I don't know how to overcome it's financial adversity by what the occurate method.
But I had a optical mind.I always think that an Koreans will overcome any adversity, although the adversity is very despair.
The Korea had a unlimitted possibility.
The Korea overcomed IMF. and already developed from a backward country to a forward country just in 50years.
I always prized that history.
The Korea is very strong country, although the country area is small.
I am proud of my motherland and respect an Koreans.
강사 첨삭
A great evening!
Thank you so much for making such a profound homework!
I know that you are a proud Korean and I know that nothing is impossible if you solve thing hand in hand right? :)
This is actually a great composition.
I hope you will be considering my corrections and remember them.
Take care always!^^
--- T. Ritchel
I\'m not a economist, so I don\'t know how to overcome it\'s financial adversity by what the occurate method.
>> I\'m not an economist, so I don\'t know how to overcome it\'s financial adversity with an accurate method.But I had a optical mind.
>> But I have an optimistic mind.
I always think that an Koreans will overcome any adversity, although the adversity is very despair.
>> I always think that Koreans will overcome any adversity, although the adversity is at its worst.The Korea had a unlimitted possibility.
>> Korea has unlimited possibilities.The Korea overcomed IMF. and already developed from a backward country to a forward country just in 50years.>> Korea had overcome IMF and already developed from a backward country to a forward country just in 50 years.I always prized that history.
>> I always find that part of history precious.The Korea is very strong country, although the country area is small.
>> Korea is a very strong country, although the country\'s area is small.I am proud of my motherland and respect an Koreans.
>> I am proud of my motherland and I respect Koreans.
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