How do you think can your country overcome it's financial adversities?

2012-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I'm not a economist, so I don't know how to overcome it's financial adversity by what the occurate method. But I had a optical mind.I always think that an Koreans will overcome any adversity, although the adversity is very despair. The Korea had a unlimitted possibility. The Korea overcomed IMF. and already developed from a backward country to a forward country just in 50years. I always prized that history. The Korea is very strong country, although the country area is small. I am proud of my motherland and respect an Koreans.

강사 첨삭

A great evening! Thank you so much for making such a profound homework! I know that you are a proud Korean and I know that nothing is impossible if you solve thing hand in hand right? :) This is actually a great composition. I hope you will be considering my corrections and remember them. Take care always!^^ --- T. Ritchel I\'m not a economist, so I don\'t know how to overcome it\'s financial adversity by what the occurate method. >> I\'m not an economist, so I don\'t know how to overcome it\'s financial adversity with an accurate method.But I had a optical mind. >> But I have an optimistic mind. I always think that an Koreans will overcome any adversity, although the adversity is very despair. >> I always think that Koreans will overcome any adversity, although the adversity is at its worst.The Korea had a unlimitted possibility. >> Korea has unlimited possibilities.The Korea overcomed IMF. and already developed from a backward country to a forward country just in 50years.>> Korea had overcome IMF and already developed from a backward country to a forward country just in 50 years.I always prized that history. >> I always find that part of history precious.The Korea is very strong country, although the country area is small. >> Korea is a very strong country, although the country\'s area is small.I am proud of my motherland and respect an Koreans. >> I am proud of my motherland and I respect Koreans.

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