How do you think chatbots will change our lives?
학생이 쓴 원문
The development of AI has affected our lives in various ways, including chatbots, etc. The new generation, which is based on internet technology, has brought positive impacts on our lives; but: there are also exceptions. Chatbots are an online system that is able to communicate with others and give all answers to any questions. If you watch the positive impact of chatbots, people can easily get information and knowledge without bits and pieces. However, if you watch the opposite side, chatbots make people become meaningless. The knowledge has developed and connected from the start of the generation. People have studied everything from millions of years ago to now. But now people easily find out any information by typing a few words. In other words, they just need that information for that moment. People should have an attitude to learn new things and knowledge that come a long years ago, even if they use chatbots. That is our responsibility to continue that knowledge by ourselves.
강사 첨삭
A detailed answer to my question, Su A! I think if the website allowed more texts to input, you would be able to say more than what you presented to me here. ^^ I can tell you always try your best to condense your thoughts, and I hope that it also practices you to be more concise with your essays, especially when needed. If you were given a writing task in school someday with a limited word count, I think this will be a wonderful exercise for you to organize your thoughts and to make sure that only the important points remain, all while successfully sending your message across. :) Good job!!
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
The new generation, which is based on internet technology, has brought positive impacts on our lives; but: there are also exceptions.
>> CORRECT!
Chatbots are an online system that is able to communicate with others and give all answers to any questions.
>> Chatbots are online systems capable of communicating with humans and providing answers to every question.
If you watch the positive impact of chatbots, people can easily get information and knowledge without bits and pieces.
>> If you try to look at it in a positive light,...
However, if you watch the opposite side, chatbots make people become meaningless.
>> However, if you look at it in a negative light,...
The knowledge has developed and connected from the start of the generation.
>> CORRECT!
People have studied everything from millions of years ago to now.
>> People have been studying everything since millions of years ago up to now.
But now people easily find out any information by typing a few words.
>> In this day and age, information is at our fingertips. (Note: Because we use our fingertips to type, this is somewhat of a more \"dramatic\" way of saying it. ^^ It\'s a good style to use when writing essays at times. )
In other words, they just need that information for that moment.
>> CORRECT!
People should have an attitude to learn new things and knowledge that come a long years ago, even if they use chatbots.
>> CORRECT!
That is our responsibility to continue that knowledge by ourselves.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> ...to continue that knowledge without further assistance from AI.
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