How do you think cyberbullying affects the lives of those bullied?
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Hello Su,
Your essay on cyberbullying reflects insightful thoughts. As you continue, remember that growth takes time, including improving your English. Keep up the effort, and each step forward is a victory!
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harassment is very bad about bullying other people and unknowing person.
>>Harassment is very bad because it involves bullying other people, even those who might not be aware of it.
Some people give hurt the other person at behind the internet’s secret.
>>Some people hurt others online while keeping their actions a secret
That is more harmful than physical violence.
>>This can be even more damaging than physical violence.\"
Because mental health is hard to recover again.
>>Because recovering from mental health issues is difficult.
Maybe that mental harmful be paining whole life for entrance of victim.
>>Mental harm might even cause pain throughout a victim\'s entire life.
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