How do you think is public transportation going to change in the future?

2021-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think the public transportation will change to eco-friendly and more safe, faster than the past. The problems of environment is going to very big problems. If we go like this as about 50 years, the Earth\'s average temperature will go up as about 8\'C. So I think eco-friendly transportations are very important nowadays. And a lot of people want to be safer than before and more faster than before. So if a lot of transportations are going to be more safer and more faster, a lot of citizens will feel good. So I think the public transportation will change to eco-friendly and more safe, faster than the past.

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The economy, culture, and livability of cities depend on their transportation infrastructure. Quality transportation options can help a city become a lively place, filled with opportunity. However, if public transit options are inadequate, people may have difficulties getting to jobs and social areas.

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I think the public transportation will change to eco-friendly and more safe, faster than the past.

>> I think that transportation should be faster, safer and eco-friendly. .

The problems of environment is going to very big problems.

>> The problem of our environment is going to be big.

If we go like this as about 50 years, the Earth\'s average temperature will go up as about 8\'C.

>> If we\'re still like this for 50 years, the Earth\'s average temperature will go up 8\'C.

So I think eco-friendly transportations are very important nowadays.

>> CORRECT

And a lot of people want to be safer than before and more faster than before.

>> And a lot of people want to be safer and faster than before.

So if a lot of transportations are going to be more safer and more faster, a lot of citizens will feel good.

>> So if this happens, a lot of people would be delighted.

So I think the public transportation will change to eco-friendly and more safe, faster than the past.

>> That\'s why I think that transportation should be faster, safer and eco-friendly.

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