How do you think is public transportation going to change in the future?

2021-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The future public transportation is likely to develop into a means to go far in a shorter time than now. And I think use eco-friendly ingredients.

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The economy, culture, and livability of cities depend on their transportation infrastructure. Quality transportation options can help a city become a lively place, filled with opportunity. However, if public transit options are inadequate, people may have difficulties getting to jobs and social areas.

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The future public transportation is likely to develop into a means to go far in a shorter time than now.

>>The future public transportation is likely to develop into a means to going to a farther destination in a short span of time.

And I think use eco-friendly ingredients.
>> And I think it would use more eco-friendly products.

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