How do you think is the world going to look like after 10 years?

2020-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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It is operating already but I think after 10 years the AI will be more exiquisite than today. For example, we are using each device\'s applications to control the house lights, air-conditioner, vacuum cleaner, watch, personal car, elevators, etc. separately. But in the future, I think it will be able to control all these stuffs entirely by connecting with one device like \"Alexa\" or \"Siri\" at once.

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It is operating already but I think after 10 years the AI will be more exiquisite than today.
>> It is operating already but I think after 10 years the AI will be more exquisite than today.

For example, we are using each device\'s applications to control the house lights, air-conditioner, vacuum cleaner, watch, personal car, elevators, etc. separately.
>> CORRECT

But in the future, I think it will be able to control all these stuffs entirely by connecting with one device like \"Alexa\" or \"Siri\" at once.
>>CORRECT

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