How do you think life would be like without the phone/telephone?
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These days we live very conveniently by using IT technology. Among them, Most people always use smartphones for convenience. Although there are a lot of functions in the smartphone, we feel convenient by using the call function basically. We can make and take a call anywhere, anytime, to anyone. Moreover, we can have a video call for free nowadays. By the way, if I live without a phone? I can’t imagine life without a phone. We can’t keep in touch when we’re wondering about someone and something happened. In my case, I can’t have a conversation with my parents in Korea. I think I feel so depressed. Especially, we’re getting to have lots of time to stay home or to have a distance carefully because of COVID-19. I guess we feel inconvenient without the phone, and the world will be getting desolate.
Beth, I have a question. You gave me feedback.
\'The doctor is no available at the moment.\'
Do I have to the word \'no\' instead \'not\' in front of \'available\'? (no vs not)
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Thank you for this [이름]. Keep it coming! :D
These days we live very conveniently by using IT technology.
Beth, I have a question. You gave me feedback.
\'The doctor is no available at the moment.\'
Do I have to the word \'no\' instead \'not\' in front of \'available\'? (no vs not)
>>> correct (These days, we live very conveniently by using IT technology.)
>>> OR: These days, we live very conveniently with the help of IT technology.
Among them, Most people always use smartphones for convenience.
>>> correct (Among them, most people always use smartphones for convenience.)
>>> OR: Among them, the smartphone is the most utilized device.
Although there are a lot of functions in the smartphone, we feel convenient by using the call function basically.
>>> correct
We can make and take a call anywhere, anytime, to anyone.
>>> correct
Moreover, we can have a video call for free nowadays.
>>> correct
By the way, if I live without a phone? I can’t imagine life without a phone.
>>> By the way, what if I live without a phone? I can’t imagine life without a phone.
>>> OR: Come to think of it, I can’t imagine life without a phone.
We can’t keep in touch when we’re wondering about someone and something happened.
>>> correct
In my case, I can’t have a conversation with my parents in Korea.
>>> correct
I think I feel so depressed.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I think I would feel so depressed.
Especially, we’re getting to have lots of time to stay home or to have a distance carefully because of COVID-19.
>>> correct
I guess we feel inconvenient without the phone, and the world will be getting desolate.
>>> I guess we feel inconvenient without the phone, and the world will get desolated.
>>> I guess we feel inconvenient without the phone, and the world will get desolated.
Beth, I have a question. You gave me feedback.
\'The doctor is no available at the moment.\'
Do I have to the word \'no\' instead \'not\' in front of \'available\'? (no vs not)
>>> Oh, I\'m sorry [이름]. That was a typographical error. It should be \"The doctor is NOT available at the moment.\" I guess I missed the letter T. Thank you for pointing that out. :D
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