How do you think that movies will change in the future?
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In my opinion, there will be a lot of movie streaming platforms in the future.
First, there are a lot of movie streaming platforms nowadays.
Second, the technologies are being improved by a lot of scientists and programmers.
Third, After Covid 19, a lot of people prefer to do in their houses.
Because of these reasons, I think there will be a lot of movie streaming platforms in the future.
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First, there are a lot of movie streaming platforms nowadays.
First, there are a lot of movie streaming platforms nowadays.
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Second, the technologies are being improved by a lot of scientists and programmers.
Second, the technologies are being improved by a lot of scientists and programmers.
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Third, After Covid 19, a lot of people prefer to do in their houses.
Third, After Covid 19, a lot of people prefer to do in their houses.
>>Third, After Covid 19, a lot of people prefer to watch in their houses.
Because of these reasons, I think there will be a lot of movie streaming platforms in the future.
Because of these reasons, I think there will be a lot of movie streaming platforms in the future.
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