How do you think the disagreement between the president and the parliament leader will affect the co

2025-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lia

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To cut to the chase, the disagreement between ruling party represented by president and the opposition party will have a negative impact on our country’s dignity as well as economy. In the era of uncertainty caused by the president elect in US, our politicians and high officials need to put their heads together to counter risks from outside rather than conflict to each other in the interest of partisan benefits. People know what the leaders are up to and what are behind political ambitions although those big shots wish that people should be ignorant of what’s in their mind. Conclusively, politicians are to be judged by people so leaders must stop unnecessary political strife as soon as possible for people’s stable livelihood and learn their good predecessors’ political career to serve people.

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Hi Steve. Your thoughts have brought up a crucial point about political leadership and its effect on the people. It\'s important for leaders to focus on collaboration, especially in challenging times, rather than pursuing their own political agendas at the cost of national well-being. Your response is food for thought. Thank you for sharing.

~ T. Lia

To cut to the chase, the disagreement between ruling party represented by president and the opposition party will have a negative impact on our country’s dignity as well as economy. 

>> To cut to the chase, the disagreement between the ruling party, represented by the president, and the opposition party will have a negative impact on our country’s dignity as well as its economy. 

In the era of uncertainty caused by the president elect in US, our politicians and high officials need to put their heads together to counter risks from outside rather than conflict to each other in the interest of partisan benefits. 

>> In the era of uncertainty caused by the president-elect in the US, our politicians and high officials need to put their heads together to counter risks from outside rather than conflict with each other in the interest of partisan benefits. 

People know what the leaders are up to and what are behind political ambitions although those big shots wish that people should be ignorant of what’s in their mind. 

>> People know what the leaders are up to and what is behind their political ambitions, although those big shots wish that people should remain ignorant of what’s in their minds. 

Conclusively, politicians are to be judged by people so leaders must stop unnecessary political strife as soon as possible for people’s stable livelihood and learn their good predecessors’ political career to serve people. 

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>> In conclusion, politicians should be judged by the people, so leaders must stop unnecessary political strife as soon as possible for the people’s stable livelihood and learn from their good predecessors’ political careers in order to serve the people. 

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