How do you think the education system nowadays improve from teacher\'s perspective?
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The education system all around the worlds has faced such drastic change ever since this Covid-19 broke out such as switching from traditional face-to-face classes to online classes with technology. And I do believe that this trend will be maintained at about the same level if not more even after the pandemic issue are completely resolved. Although there are many advantages of online classes, there are some critical drawbacks, for example, lack of interactions and difficulties of sustaining attentions. Therefore, one of the most urgent way of improving our current education system would be coming up with ways of having students engaged with teachers and other students on the same level as face-to-face classes with technology.
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The education system all around the worlds has faced such drastic change ever since this Covid-19 broke out such as switching from traditional face-to-face classes to online classes with technology.
>> The education system all around the world has faced such drastic change ever since this Covid-19 broke out such as switching from traditional face-to-face classes to online classes using technology.
And I do believe that this trend will be maintained at about the same level if not more even after the pandemic issue are completely resolved.
>> And I do believe that this trend will be maintained at about the same level, and if not, even more after the pandemic is completely resolved.
Although there are many advantages of online classes, there are some critical drawbacks, for example, lack of interactions and difficulties of sustaining attentions.
>> Although there are many advantages when it comes to online classes, there are still some critical drawbacks; for example, lack of interaction and difficulty in sustaining attentions.
Therefore, one of the most urgent way of improving our current education system would be coming up with ways of having students engaged with teachers and other students on the same level as face-to-face classes with technology.
>> Therefore, one of the most urgent ways of improving our current education system would be coming up with ways of having students engaged with teachers and other students on the same level as face-to-face classes with technology.
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