How do you think the world will change in 100 years?

2020-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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How do you think the world will change in 100 years? I am not sure how it will change, but I am really expecting there will be a lot of exciting things. AI and the computer technology can be harmful to human being. Some rich guys will get richer and most of the people will get poorer.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thanks for this. These are all grammatically correct and you\'ve used your punctuations properly. Well done! ^^

Cheers to a productive Tuesday! Enjoy. ^_^

~T.Avery

I am not sure how it will change, but I am really expecting there will be a lot of exciting things.

>> CORRECT
AI and the computer technology can be harmful to human being.

>> CORRECT
Some rich guys will get richer and most of the people will get poorer.

>> CORRECT

OR>> The rich might be wealthier while poor people\'s situation may worsen.

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