How do you think the world will change in 100 years?
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The wolrd will be changed in 100 years. Nowadays the world is changing dramatically. In the future, the cars are flying, we can see someone who lives in other planet. Maybe, human moves to other planet, like Mrs. [Name] will be all martian.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your thoughts on this. Life in Mars sounds quite interesting. ^^
Cheers to a productive Tuesday! Enjoy and see you soon. ^_^
~T.Avery
The world will be changed in 100 years.
>> CORRECT
Nowadays the world is changing dramatically.
>> CORRECT
In the future, the cars are flying, we can see someone who lives in other planet.
>> In the future, there will be flying cars and we might be able to see others living in a different planet.
Maybe, human moves to other planet, like Mrs.
>> Maybe, humans might move to other planets, like Mars.
We will be all martian.
>> We will all be Martians.
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