How do you think the world will change in 100 years?
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Happy Thursday, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your thoughts on this. I\'m glad you connected it to radiology as it is your forte.
Anyway, take care today and see you soon! ^_^
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The hottest issue recently raised is Artificial Intelligence.
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Many researchers at medical field expect to use AI for patient diagnosis and treatment.
>> Many researchers in the medical field expect to use AI for patient diagnosis and treatment.
With regard to radiation oncology department, we have to contour tumor and normal tissues on the CT image however, if AI works perfectly, we don\'t have to define tumor.
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We might use special function that has learnt from a lot of cases instead human do it.
>> We might use special functions developed from various studies, instead of doing it ourselves.
In radiology department, AI can diagnosis without confirming professional doctors.
>> In the radiology department, AI can diagnose without seeking confirmation from professional doctors.
I heard that AI developed a lot, but it needs to be more accuracy if we want to use it in medical purposes.
>> I heard that AI developed a lot, but it needs to be more accurate if we want to use it in medical purposes.
I guess that it will be more convenient to live in this world because AI will do anything that humans used to do before.
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But I have concern that we might not have jobs in the future.
>> However, I am concerned that we might not have jobs in the future.
Computers make people live more convenient life but there are a lot of disadvantages using it.
>> Computers make people live a more convenient life but there are a lot of disadvantages of using it.
I think that we need to be aware of harm it and then invent things.
>> I think that we need to be aware of its cons before inventing things.
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