How do you think the world would be different if there was only one language?
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First, there would be no need to invest much time on learning foreign languages to communicate with people in other languages.
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However, as far as l know, foreign language education markets are big enough globally to hire so many people, who can make a living with them.
>>However, as far as l know, foreign language education markets are big enough globally to hire so many people, who can make a living out of them.
In my university, there are many people to work in foreign language fields.
>> In my university, there are were a lot of people who work in the foreign language field.
Second, there would be more flows of people, services, products between countries because I think language barrier is one of big problems to impede international exchanges.
>>Second, there would be more flows of people, services, products between countries because I think the language barrier is one of the big problems that impedes international exchanges.
Under one language system, countries across the world could communicate or interact each other much more easily.
>> Under a one language system, countries across the world could communicate or interact each other much more easily.
Third, more super powers could come up.
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Neighboring countries would combine around powerful or large countries, which would lead to more super power such as America or China that have big territory and population in common.
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But the thing is that language integration never happens because the Creator didn\'t want it and won\'t want it as well.
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