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2010-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I'm not good. It's because I'll go to the audition in a few time. The audition chooses the choir members. Although I'm ready for a audition, but I'm straining. I hope pass the audition. What do you have any plans today? - Mothing special. First of all, I'll have a breakfast and than I'll think. Although you are late to work and make a loss, You'll be able to do a better life. It's because you did for better be worth than your work.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji Na!! You passed here a good composition. Well don’t be nervous with the audition. Just give it your best during the audition and hopefully you will be chosen as one of the newest choir members. Good luck!! See you tomorrow!! XoXo Lei   I'm not good.>>correct >>I’m not feeling good (better) It's because I'll go to the audition in a few time.>>It’d because I’ll go to the audition in a few minutes The audition chooses the choir members.>>In this audition, they will choose the choir members Although I'm ready for a audition, but I'm straining.>>correct I hope pass the audition.>>I hope to pass the audition What do you have any plans today?>>what are your plans today? Mothing special. >>Nothing special First of all, I'll have a breakfast and than I'll think.>>First, I’ll have my breakfast then I’ll think what to do next Although you are late to work and make a loss,>>correct You'll be able to do a better life.>>correct It's because you did for better be worth than your work. >>it’s because you did something better that is more worthy than your work.

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