How do you think transportation will change in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
I guess the appearance and function of transportation will be barely changed. Because there are many types of them which can fly, float on the water, and move on their own rails. Therefore, I think companies already released what they developed. I’m a little bit sure that they will not release new transportation and just fix them that they already made.
As this reason, I think speed of transportation will be faster than now. Korean think speed is the most important factor when they use transportation. Thus, I predict people will build many roads which is the fastest one to reach other cities not to develop other types of transportation.
강사 첨삭
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I guess the appearance and function of transportation will be barely changed.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I guess the appearance and function of transportation will barely change.
Because there are many types of them which can fly, float on the water, and move on their own rails.
>>> correct
Therefore, I think companies already released what they developed.
>>> correct
I’m a little bit sure that they will not release new transportation and just fix them that they already made.
>>> I’m a little bit sure that they will not release new transportation and just fix those that they have already made.
As this reason, I think speed of transportation will be faster than now.
>>> For this reason, I think the speed of transportation will be much faster than now.
Korean think speed is the most important factor when they use transportation.
>>> OR: Koreans think speed is the most important factor when they use transportation.
Thus, I predict people will build many roads which is the fastest one to reach other cities not to develop other types of transportation.
>>> OR: Thus, I predict people will build many roads to make it faster to reach other cities, not to develop other types of transportation.
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