How do you think victims of racism or discrimination feel?
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Good evening Sir [이름]!
Well said. ^_^ Thank you for always doing your homework.
I appreciate it a lot. I hope that racism and discrimination will become less next year.
We have to respect and treat each other equally.
I hope that you will have an awesome evening and weekend.
I am looking forward to our class tonight.
Teacher Nina
With any reasons, racism or discrimination cannot be justified.
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No one in the world is privileged to discriminate others simply due to the different skin color, race or nationality.
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>> No one in the world is privileged to discriminate others simply due to skin color, race or nationality.
If you do, you or your descendent will be paid back later.
>> If you do, you or your descendant will pay back later.
Looking at history, genocide brought in another genocide by the victims.
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As we all want to be treated equally and respectively, we need to treat others as such.
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However, people tend to be wicked enough to be strong to the weak and weak to the strong.
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If he/she is victimized by racism, he/she often behaves the same way to other weak races.
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It also doesn\'t matter what job we do, whether we are a street cleaner, refuse collector, or a brain surgeon, we can sit and eat together with no rank order.
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We are equal.
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And with this attitude it would help to eliminate wars and racism.
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The victims of racism feel rejected or start getting an inferiority complex.
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Along with legalization against racism, people’s perception should change as well.
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