How do you think victims of racism or discrimination feel?

2014-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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With any reasons, racism or discrimination cannot be justified. No one in the world is privileged to discriminate others simply due to the different skin color, race or nationality. If you do, you or your descendent will be paid back later. Looking at history, genocide brought in another genocide by the victims. As we all want to be treated equally and respectively, we need to treat others as such. However, people tend to be wicked enough to be strong to the weak and weak to the strong. If he/she is victimized by racism, he/she often behaves the same way to other weak races. It also doesn't matter what job we do, whether we are a street cleaner, refuse collector, or a brain surgeon, we can sit and eat together with no rank order. We are equal. And with this attitude it would help to eliminate wars and racism. The victims of racism feel rejected or start getting an inferiority complex. Along with legalization against racism, people’s perception should change as well.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir [이름]!

Well said. ^_^ Thank you for always doing your homework.

I appreciate it a lot. I hope that racism and discrimination will become less next year.

We have to respect and treat each other equally.

I hope that you will have an awesome evening and weekend.

I am looking forward to our class tonight.

Teacher Nina


With any reasons, racism or discrimination cannot be justified.

>> CORRECT

No one in the world is privileged to discriminate others simply due to the different skin color, race or nationality.

>> CORRECT

>> No one in the world is privileged to discriminate others simply due to skin color, race or nationality.

If you do, you or your descendent will be paid back later.

>> If you do, you or your descendant will pay back later.

Looking at history, genocide brought in another genocide by the victims.

>> CORRECT

As we all want to be treated equally and respectively, we need to treat others as such.

>> CORRECT

However, people tend to be wicked enough to be strong to the weak and weak to the strong.

>> CORRECT

If he/she is victimized by racism, he/she often behaves the same way to other weak races.

>> CORRECT

It also doesn\'t matter what job we do, whether we are a street cleaner, refuse collector, or a brain surgeon, we can sit and eat together with no rank order.

>> CORRECT

We are equal.

>> CORRECT

And with this attitude it would help to eliminate wars and racism.

>> CORRECT

The victims of racism feel rejected or start getting an inferiority complex.

>> CORRECT

Along with legalization against racism, people’s perception should change as well.

>> CORRECT

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