How do you think victims of racism or discrimination feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
That\'s not right and unfair.
I think they feel sad, desperate and angry.
It\'s untair to be victims of racism or discrimination by race.
Superior race and inferior race must not exist. we are just a person who is respected.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
That\'s not right and unfair.
>>CORRECT
I think they feel sad, desperate and angry.
>>CORRECT
It\'s untair to be victims of racism or discrimination by race.
>>>It\'s unfair to be the victims of racism or discrimination by race.
Superior race and inferior race must not exist.
>>CORRECT
we are just a person who is respected.
>>>We are all the same and we all deserve to be respected.
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