How do you think will people communicate in the future? Use your imagination.

2015-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi Jessie~ I'm so sad to be unable to call. But sometimes, I think we need a breaktime to recharge. Isn't it? *^^* Though you don't celebrate the lunar New Year's day, have a blessed holiday too!! To answer your homework, I think people will communicate to read people's mind in the future like telepathy. haha. It's a very chlche. My imagination is poor. Besides, I am satisfied our communication. I don't want to be developed. Because I'm a little illiteracy.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! Thanks for that! I am also glad that you still shared  your idea. Why not. Maybe  that could happen in the future. I believe it is possible. Well, let\'s enjoy this day. See you soon! ~T. Jessie~ Hi Jessie~ >> Correct! >> Hi Jessie!I\'m so sad to be unable to call. >> Correct! OR>> I am sad that I won\'t be able to talk to you. But sometimes, I think we need a breaktime to recharge. >> Correct! Isn\'t it? *^^* >> Correct! Though you don\'t celebrate the lunar New Year\'s day, have a blessed holiday too!! >> Correct!To answer your homework, I think people will communicate to read people\'s mind in the future like telepathy. haha. >> To asnwer the homework, I think that people will be able to communicate by reading one\'s mind in the future. Like telepathy. It\'s a very chlche. >> Do you mean: It\'s cliched. My imagination is poor. >> Correct!Besides, I am satisfied our communication. >> Besides, I am satisfied with our means of communication. I don\'t want to be developed. >> Correct! Because I\'m a little illiteracy. >> Because I\'m a little illeterate.

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