How do you think will people communicate in the future? Use your imagination.
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Hi Jessie~
I'm so sad to be unable to call. But sometimes, I think we need a breaktime to recharge. Isn't it? *^^* Though you don't celebrate the lunar New Year's day, have a blessed holiday too!!
To answer your homework, I think people will communicate to read people's mind in the future like telepathy. haha. It's a very chlche. My imagination is poor.
Besides, I am satisfied our communication. I don't want to be developed. Because I'm a little illiteracy.
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Good afternoon!
Thanks for that!
I am also glad that you still shared your idea.
Why not. Maybe that could happen in the future.
I believe it is possible.
Well, let\'s enjoy this day. See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hi Jessie~
>> Correct!
>> Hi Jessie!I\'m so sad to be unable to call.
>> Correct!
OR>> I am sad that I won\'t be able to talk to you.
But sometimes, I think we need a breaktime to recharge.
>> Correct!
Isn\'t it? *^^*
>> Correct!
Though you don\'t celebrate the lunar New Year\'s day, have a blessed holiday too!!
>> Correct!To answer your homework, I think people will communicate to read people\'s mind in the future like telepathy. haha.
>> To asnwer the homework, I think that people will be able to communicate by reading one\'s mind in the future. Like telepathy.
It\'s a very chlche.
>> Do you mean: It\'s cliched.
My imagination is poor.
>> Correct!Besides, I am satisfied our communication. >> Besides, I am satisfied with our means of communication.
I don\'t want to be developed.
>> Correct!
Because I\'m a little illiteracy.
>> Because I\'m a little illeterate.
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