How do you think will this innovation change foldable displays in South Korea and in the entire worl
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Customers always want to have unique products which look different with previous goods and have new functions. I don\'t know what advantages Z-flip has. It is just smaller than conventional phones. The screen size is not bigger than others and there is connetive part in the middle of smart phone which looks ugly. Although, it has limitations, many people would like to have it due to the color of it and design. I can\'t imagine what feature we will have in the future because it hasn\'t changed a lot since smart phones introduced. I don\'t think it is good for customers to have new products every year. Major companies introduce new version that changes some part of hardware such as CPU, camera, and screen. Its fundermental fuction is almost same. However, I have experienced a lot of things that I hadn\'t imagined before. I think that A.I will change everything in all areas.
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Customers always want to have unique products which look different with previous goods and have new functions.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t know what advantages Z-flip has.
>> CORRECT!It is just smaller than conventional phones.
>> CORRECT!The screen size is not bigger than others and there is connetive part in the middle of smart phone which looks ugly.
>> The screen size is not bigger than others, and there is a connective part at the middle of the smart phone, which looks ugly.
Although, it has limitations, many people would like to have it due to the color of it and design.
>> CORRECT!I can\'t imagine what feature we will have in the future because it hasn\'t changed a lot since smart phones introduced.
>> I can\'t imagine what feature we will have in the future because it hasn\'t changed a lot since smart phones were introduced.
I don\'t think it is good for customers to have new products every year.
>> CORRECT!Major companies introduce new version that changes some part of hardware such as CPU, camera, and screen.
>> CORRECT!
Its fundermental fuction is almost same.
>> Its fundamental fuction is almost the same.
However, I have experienced a lot of things that I hadn\'t imagined before.
>> CORRECT!I think that A.I will change everything in all areas.
>> CORRECT!
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