: How do you think will you improve your English skills more?

2020-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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First of all, I should use English everyday even a little. Actually, because I hated English, I haven\'t been close to it so far. I also need to familiarize with many words. So I recently have memorized at least 40 words each day. And I will try to study with American TV series once I take my TOEIC test. Of course I am going to receive your help. In short, I should be interested in English and have effort consistently.

강사 첨삭

Hi Genie! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here as well. I think you are on the right track in harnessing your skills. I just do hope that you stay consistent with your practice! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah 

First of all, I should use English everyday even a little.
>>CORRECT
Actually, because I hated English, I haven\'t been close to it so far.
>>CORRECT OR
>>I hated English so I\'ve never tried understanding and getting to know the language more.
I also need to familiarize with many words. 
>>I also need to familiarize myself with so many words.
So I recently have memorized at least 40 words each day.
>>CORRECT
And I will try to study with American TV series once I take my TOEIC test.
>>And I will try to learn English more by watching American TV series once I finished with my TOIEC test.
Of course I am going to receive your help.
>>CORRECT
>>Of course, studying English online would be a big help for me.
In short, I should be interested in English and have effort consistently.
>>In short, I should be more interested in learning English and stay consistent with my efforts.

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