How do you think you could reduce stress or prevent stress in your life?
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Food is the easiest way to get rid of stress. But you have to watch out what you are eating. :)
-T. Maine
The best simple way is eating delicious foods.
>>The simplest way to relieve stress is eating delicious food.
When I feel stress first, I should eat.
>>When I feel stress, first I think I should eat.
After I\'m full, I can think more wisely.
>>After feeling full, I can think better.
Another way which reduce stress is not thinking anything.
>>Another way which can help reduce stress is not thinking about anything.
When I\'m stressful, I can not s[이름]p because thoughts are made more and more.
>>When I\'m stressed, I can\'t s[이름]p well because my thoughts bother me more.
I need to remove them to s[이름]p.
>>Correct.
So I listen to Youtube audio program when I get as[이름]p.
>>So I usually listen to audio programs to s[이름]p.
S[이름]ping is the best recovering way for both body and mental.
>>S[이름]ping is the best way to recover both physically and mentally.
The other way is meeting friends.
>>The other way is meeting our friends.
I love to hang out with friends.
>>I love hanging out with my friends.
I can talk, drink, and laugh.
>>I can talk, drink, and laugh with them.
They reduce my gloomy feeling.
>>Correct.
When I meet them, I usually eat delicious foods and go to the hot place.
>>Correct.
The mood in the place make me excited.
>>The mood in the place makes me excited.
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