How do you think you could reduce stress or prevent stress in your life?

2021-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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The best simple way is eating delicious foods. When I feel stress first, I should eat. After I\'m full, I can think more wisely. Another way which reduce stress is not thinking anything. When I\'m stressful, I can not s[이름]p because thoughts are made more and more. I need to remove them to s[이름]p. So I listen to Youtube audio program when I get as[이름]p. S[이름]ping is the best recovering way for both body and mental. The other way is meeting friends. I love to hang out with friends. I can talk, drink, and laugh. They reduce my gloomy feeling. When I meet them, I usually eat delicious foods and go to the hot place. The mood in the place make me excited.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Food is the easiest way to get rid of stress.  But you have to watch out what you are eating. :)


-T. Maine


The best simple way is eating delicious foods.

>>The simplest way to relieve stress is eating delicious food.
 When I feel stress first, I should eat.

>>When I feel stress, first I think I should eat.
 After I\'m full, I can think more wisely.

>>After feeling full, I can think better.
 Another way which reduce stress is not thinking anything.

>>Another way which can help reduce stress is not thinking about anything.
 When I\'m stressful, I can not s[이름]p because thoughts are made more and more.

>>When I\'m stressed, I can\'t s[이름]p well because my thoughts bother me more.

I need to remove them to s[이름]p.

>>Correct.
 So I listen to Youtube audio program when I get as[이름]p.

>>So I usually listen to audio programs to s[이름]p.
 S[이름]ping is the best recovering way for both body and mental.

>>S[이름]ping is the best way to recover both physically and mentally.
 The other way is meeting friends.

>>The other way is meeting our friends.
 I love to hang out with friends.

>>I love hanging out with my friends. 

I can talk, drink, and laugh.

>>I can talk, drink, and laugh with them.
 They reduce my gloomy feeling.

>>Correct.
 When I meet them, I usually eat delicious foods and go to the hot place.

>>Correct.
 The mood in the place make me excited.

>>The mood in the place makes me excited.

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