How do you think you will change in the future?
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This is what I keep asking myself nowadays. The extreme point of this question is the pursuit of happiness. That is how happy I will be in the future, so to be so, what should I do right now? Actually, I have no idea about what I need to prepare for my bright future. To study more, I am not confident enough to immerse myself into studying delightfully. I might lose interest soon, or I am likely to do very well. I can be a professor after the study. To travel more before I retire from my company, I would like to stay out of my country for some time to have a pause in life, but now we are under COVID 19. I can’t think of anything about going abroad. COVID 19 is getting stronger and stronger. What can I do if so? My future will come like this as I am now. I will change little by little, so I myself can’t feel a big difference between now and the future. Surely I can notice my physical change, but my spirit will be the same as now.
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Hi [이름], thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin
>>This is what I keep on asking myself nowadays.
The extreme point of this question is the pursuit of happiness.
>>The point of this question is the pursuit of Happiness.
That is how happy I will be in the future, so to be so, what should I do right now?
>>On how to be happy in the future. what should I do right now to obtain that?
Actually, I have no idea about what I need to prepare for my bright future.
>>Actually, I have no idea on what to do to have a bright future ahead of me.
To study more, I am not confident enough to immerse myself into studying delightfully.
>>The truth is I am not confident enough to apply what I\'m learning from the books.
I might lose interest soon, or I am likely to do very well. I can be a professor after the study.
>>I lose interest in the middle like I usually do. I can be a professor once I graduate.
To travel more before I retire from my company, I would like to stay out of my country for some time to have a pause in life, but now we are under COVID 19.
>>I want to travel more after I retire from my company. I would like to take a vacation abroad and have some time to relax but now we are on a pandemic situation.
I can’t think of anything about going abroad. COVID 19 is getting stronger and stronger.
>>I can\'t think about anything but to go abroad. COVID19 is getting serious.
What can I do if so? My future will come like this as I am now.
>>What can I do? It will just stay like this.
I will change little by little, so I myself can’t feel a big difference between now and the future.
>>It will change one at a time, there will be a big difference between now and the future.
Surely I can notice my physical change, but my spirit will be the same as now.
>> Surely I can see that I\'m changing physically but my spirit is still the same.
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