How do you think you will change in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Today, I didn\'t understand your pronunciation.
Title. . Last time is son . .
But I will do my best to understand what you say.
My age is 51. I thought too late to start salesman again. But I had a chance to work foreigner company.
For survival in competition, I must speak english well and make a sales performance in the futere.
Can I change? I must be change for my goal
Thanks.
강사 첨삭
1. My age is 51.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'m 51 years old.
2. I thought too late to start salesman again.
>>I thought it\'s too late to be a salesman again.
3. But I had a chance to work foreigner company.
>>But I had a chance to work with a foreign company.
4.For survival in competition, I must speak english well and make a sales performance in the futere.
>>For survival in competition, I must speak English well and make a sales performance better in the future.
5. Can I change? I must be change for my goal.
>> Can I change? I must change for my goal.
Good.
Please, ask me anything you are not sure with or any unclear words in the class. It\'s alright.
- T. Melody ^^
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