How do you try to spice up your weekend?
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Thank you for this Lisa!
I have 5 ideas here.
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#1 Get the sleep and rest we need.
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Contrary to what many people think, taking a weekend off is not a waste of time!
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But we should take care of ourselves and make sure we get a good rest for the next week.
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#2 Read or study a book.
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The most important book for me is the Bible.
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The Bible helps me to develop wisdom and to build good relationships with others.
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It can help us be more harmonious with our family and our relatives.
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It helps us to solve the problem caused by many worries and anxiety in our life.
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we also feel comforted in times of loneliness and hardship.
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#3 See a friend for a coffee break.
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Most of us don\'t have much space to meet up with friends on weekdays because most of us are packed with class schedules or work schedules.
>>> OR: Most of us don\'t have much free time to meet up with friends on weekdays because most of us are packed with class schedules or work schedules.
What could be more perfect than doing it on the weekend?
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Grab a good coffee or meal and grab a chance to catch up with everyone.
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But these days, there is a way to meet up with Zoom.
>>> OR: But these days, there is a way to meet up through Zoom.
Actually, in my case, I met a Canadian friend and a British friend, and a Mexican friend at the same time on Saturday morning by using zoom.
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Meeting at Zoom is very convenient and affordable. haha
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#4 Enjoy a mini-vacation
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There are several beautiful places near my house.
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For example, Farmland which has some animals and a beautiful lake with sunset, well-developed parks which has woods.
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Sometimes I go there for taking a walk, having a coffee and enjoying the fresh air.
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In contrast to the hustle and bustle of the city, God\'s creation of nature always provides great relaxation for humans.
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#5 Watch Movies
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If you go to the JW.org website, you will find a variety of videos and movies.
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I mostly like movies with biblical characters like \"Jonah\" and \"Daniel\", etc.
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They are very interesting, informative, and valuable.
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